dimecres, 1 de maig del 2013

Story made by: Javier Alaez, Elisabeth Baquerizas, María Benítez and Sergi Cendrero


The Aubriot brothers 

and the Nessie Case



          Once upon a time, on a summer morning, two brothers were making their baggages. The brother and sister were French and they were going to go on holidays to Inverness, Scotland.

          "We should go to the airport, it's late", said Marie. Marie had long brown hair and brown eyes, and she was thin and short. She was responsible and calm.

          "Don't worry! We have time!", said her brother. Xavier had short brown hair and brown eyes. He was thin and tall. 

          Maybe Marie and Xavier were seemed physically, but mentally they were very different. Unlike Marie, Xavier was a little irresponsible and crazy. Why they made such a good couple when they had to resolve cases. 

          Finally they arrive to the plane and after some travel hours they arrive to Inverness.

          When they were heading towards their hotel, a man stopped in front of them. The man was short and thin, and he had brown eyes and brown short hair. He had concern face.

          "Can we help you with something?", asked Marie.

          "Oh, yes... are you the famous French detectives? I mean... the Aubriot brothers... the best detectives of France. Are you the Aubriot brothers?", said the man. He seemed nervous and excited.

          "Oh là là! Have we got fans in Scotland?", joked Xavier, funny.

          "Yes, we are the Aubriot brothers. I'm Marie Aubriot, nice to meet you.", said Marie.

          "Oh, I know perfectly who you are! Nice to meet you, Ms Aubriot. I'm Sergius Smith. And you are Xavier Smith, nice to meet you too, Mr Aubriot!", said Sergius very happy.

          "Nice to meet you!", said Xavier.

          "Could you help me with something?", asked Sergius.

          "Yes, of course! What problem have you got, Mr Smith?", said Marie.

          "A week ago my wife, Betty, disappeared. I didn't tell this the police because Betty and I discussed the same day that she disappeared, and I think she stopped loving me and she left me. I would like you find my wife because I want to talk with her. I miss my dear Betty and I want her back with me.", explained Sergius.

          "The truth is that we came here to be on holidays... but we can't ignore a fan's problem! We'll help you, Mr Smith!", said Xavier.

          "Oh, thank you very much!", Sergius was very excited.

          Sergius took Marie and Xavier to their hotel for leave their baggage. After this, they went to Sergius' home. He showed them Betty's photos and he explained them details that could help Marie and Xavier in the investigation.

          The TV was on and Marie watched a new of Nessie, the monster of the Loch Ness. She asked Sergius about it and he told Marie and Xavier that lately very much accidents had occured in the Loch Ness and some people from Inverness had disappeared.

          "This information is very helpful.", said Marie.

          "Yes, the Nessie Case could be related to the disappearence of your wife.", said Xavier.

          "Oh, this is fantastic! I mean... this is horrible. But maybe my wife didn't leave me. You must find my wife, please! And all the other disappeared people, of course!", said Sergius.

          "Yes, of course! We'll do everything we can to help all this people.", said Marie.

          Immediately, Sergius, Marie and Xavier went to tell the police the Betty's disappearance. With the police's help, the Aubriot brothers investigate the Nessie Case for a month.

          Finally, they discovered that there was a robot in the Loch Ness. Nessie wasn't really Nessie. It was a very big machine controlled by an evil man, who captured all people who came near the lake. When Sergius and Betty discussed, Betty went to the lake to relax and the robot captured her.

          The police captured the man who controlled the robot and put him in jail. All the disappeared people returned their homes with their families and the Nessie robot began to be used for good purposes, such as attraction for tourists. 
Betty returned with Sergius and they were very happy together. 

          Marie and Xavier went to the airport because they must return France, and Sergius and Betty accompanied them.

          "Thank you very much for all this. My wife is with me again!", said Sergius, excited.

          "Yes, thank you very much for rescue me!", said Betty too.

          "Your welcome, Mr and Ms Smith!", said Marie.

          "Another case resolved by the Aubriot brothers!", said Xavier, proud.

          And then, Marie and Xavier said goodbye and they boarded the plane to return France.


THE END

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