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Baby Detective

THE BABY DETECTIVE

Once upon a time a little boy called Towi and he was 1 year old. One day, he and her mother went to the park. When they arrived, Towi addressed to the toboggan, and her mother realized that he needed to diaper. When they arrived at the car, the mother put the baby on a table and when she turned to take the diaper, Towi saw a letter and he went up to the table to read the letter. Next to the letter, there were a loupe, and it has got magic powers, because it could read the letter’s message.  When the mother turned up, the baby was not there. The mother looked up the baby for the all the park and she didn’t find him. She called the police and they were looking up for him for hours but the Towi didn’t appear. The mother went to the house waiting for the baby.

While, the baby was investigating what the letter said. In the letter it said someone steal him teddy bear. The teddy bear called Yogi was a bad toy. Towi followed the tracks for reclaim her teddy bear. Towi doesn’t know that the Yogi was bad. Through the loupe, when he wants to read the letter, it can read for him. In the letter, put that the teddy bear were in a desert house in the beach. When he went to the beach, in the path he found another letter. In the letter put that he had to go to the forest and there we will found the teddy bear.

When he arrived at the forest, he met a estrange toy. Towi, scared, started to cry. The estrange toy tried to reassure him and he explained that her teddy were kidnapped for thieves of teddy bears, because in the ancient, all of the teddy bears carried a inside of them gold, and they want to escape. Towi wants to recuperate the teddy bear, but the bad toys were very far away. Fortunately the estrange toy had wings, and they can went flying. When they arrive they found the bad toys, and they explain that they want to recuperate Yogi. They were speaking a lot of hours and they reached to an agreement. They decided that the bad toys had to return all of the gold to the teddy bears.

After a few hours, all the gold was distribute to the corresponding teddies. At the end, Towi arrived at home, and her mother gave him a big hug.

CHARACTERS AND PLACES

TOWI (baby detective)

THE BEACH HOUSE

THE EXTREANGE TOY

THE SCARED MOTHER

THE LETTERS 

THE BAD TOYS

Written by: Marina Izquierdo, Javier Merino, Felipe Perez, Tamara Rube and Xenia Valls

Story made by: Javier Alaez, Elisabeth Baquerizas, María Benítez and Sergi Cendrero

The Aubriot brothers 

and the Nessie Case

          Once upon a time, on a summer morning, two brothers were making their baggages. The brother and sister were French and they were going to go on holidays to Inverness, Scotland.

          "We should go to the airport, it's late", said Marie. Marie had long brown hair and brown eyes, and she was thin and short. She was responsible and calm.

          "Don't worry! We have time!", said her brother. Xavier had short brown hair and brown eyes. He was thin and tall. 

          Maybe Marie and Xavier were seemed physically, but mentally they were very different. Unlike Marie, Xavier was a little irresponsible and crazy. Why they made such a good couple when they had to resolve cases. 

          Finally they arrive to the plane and after some travel hours they arrive to Inverness.

          When they were heading towards their hotel, a man stopped in front of them. The man was short and thin, and he had brown eyes and brown short hair. He had concern face.

          "Can we help you with something?", asked Marie.

          "Oh, yes... are you the famous French detectives? I mean... the Aubriot brothers... the best detectives of France. Are you the Aubriot brothers?", said the man. He seemed nervous and excited.

          "Oh là là! Have we got fans in Scotland?", joked Xavier, funny.

          "Yes, we are the Aubriot brothers. I'm Marie Aubriot, nice to meet you.", said Marie.

          "Oh, I know perfectly who you are! Nice to meet you, Ms Aubriot. I'm Sergius Smith. And you are Xavier Smith, nice to meet you too, Mr Aubriot!", said Sergius very happy.

          "Nice to meet you!", said Xavier.

          "Could you help me with something?", asked Sergius.

          "Yes, of course! What problem have you got, Mr Smith?", said Marie.

          "A week ago my wife, Betty, disappeared. I didn't tell this the police because Betty and I discussed the same day that she disappeared, and I think she stopped loving me and she left me. I would like you find my wife because I want to talk with her. I miss my dear Betty and I want her back with me.", explained Sergius.

          "The truth is that we came here to be on holidays... but we can't ignore a fan's problem! We'll help you, Mr Smith!", said Xavier.

          "Oh, thank you very much!", Sergius was very excited.

          Sergius took Marie and Xavier to their hotel for leave their baggage. After this, they went to Sergius' home. He showed them Betty's photos and he explained them details that could help Marie and Xavier in the investigation.

          The TV was on and Marie watched a new of Nessie, the monster of the Loch Ness. She asked Sergius about it and he told Marie and Xavier that lately very much accidents had occured in the Loch Ness and some people from Inverness had disappeared.

          "This information is very helpful.", said Marie.

          "Yes, the Nessie Case could be related to the disappearence of your wife.", said Xavier.

          "Oh, this is fantastic! I mean... this is horrible. But maybe my wife didn't leave me. You must find my wife, please! And all the other disappeared people, of course!", said Sergius.

          "Yes, of course! We'll do everything we can to help all this people.", said Marie.

          Immediately, Sergius, Marie and Xavier went to tell the police the Betty's disappearance. With the police's help, the Aubriot brothers investigate the Nessie Case for a month.

          Finally, they discovered that there was a robot in the Loch Ness. Nessie wasn't really Nessie. It was a very big machine controlled by an evil man, who captured all people who came near the lake. When Sergius and Betty discussed, Betty went to the lake to relax and the robot captured her.

          The police captured the man who controlled the robot and put him in jail. All the disappeared people returned their homes with their families and the Nessie robot began to be used for good purposes, such as attraction for tourists. Betty returned with Sergius and they were very happy together. 

          Marie and Xavier went to the airport because they must return France, and Sergius and Betty accompanied them.

          "Thank you very much for all this. My wife is with me again!", said Sergius, excited.

          "Yes, thank you very much for rescue me!", said Betty too.

          "Your welcome, Mr and Ms Smith!", said Marie.

          "Another case resolved by the Aubriot brothers!", said Xavier, proud.

          And then, Marie and Xavier said goodbye and they boarded the plane to return France.

THE END

Treball de: Ivan C./ Alex G./ Marina A./ Camila C.

THE CHILDREN OF ORFANAGE

Summary

The detective Jackson is a detective of XXIII century. He is going to the past, specifically XVIII century to investigate a case to help people to find a children missing. The people don’t know that he comes from the future.

He want resolve a case. Because in the XXIII century meet few children in the planet. Then he want avoid the death of children for exist in your century. The children of XVIII century live in orphanage. “The bugs” is a group of criminals. They are pretend to good people and they adopt children of orphanage after kill.

Jackson goes to house. He finds the bodies of children. He writes address of house and he take to the orphanage. In the orphanage, Jackson meets a beautiful girl. She helps to his resolve this case.

Chapter 1

 Detective Jackson is a detective that solve cases. One day her boss said you had to solve a case of children who had disappeared in the present and for that he had to go into the past to prevent the death of the children. The next day her boss called her office to explain the information for the case. Boss explained to Jackson that in the past that children´s disappear. The next day Jackson prepares things necessary to travel the past. When he comes to the past is in an environment very different from that came.

Chapter 2

He comes to the orphanage to search evidence or approve. He realize that people was toking at him because he was wearing strange clothes. So he decide walk quickly to avoid suspices. When Jackson arrived to the orphanage, he goes to the office to look the files. Then he found the children´s file. In the tab was written the name, the date of birth and thee year when the children was adopted. Jackson has another problem: search the children´s.

Chapter 3

The next day he starts to search the children because in his century few remain. He goes to town hall and he search the names of person live in the village. He finds a name a band of criminals. The name is “the bugs”. They are pretend to good people but they aren’t so. They adopted the children after kill. The next day he goes to the house and he find the body of children.  

Chapter 4

He looked in to the bugs home and he found a lot of children dead, except one, the boy helped Jackson to found "the bugs" he said that it was only one person, but the others persons of the group had fear and they left out the group. Only was the boss, he had the other childrens. Jackson and the boy went to find the boss. They watched in an old street and they saw the boss,Jackson and the boy, they went quickly to catch the boss.The boss couldn't escape and Jackson catch the gun and shooted in its arm and its heart. Jackson and the boy saved the childrens and took the childrens to the orphanage.

Jackson passed the exam, its time to go future. But he decided stay in the past, Jackson stays with the boy and tells the true history.

THE END

TREBALL FET PER:

Marina Aguirre

Camila Constela

Alex Gisbert

Ivan Castillo 

The detective dog of the Cardona

Once upon a time in a mountain village called Cardona in the outskirts of Barcelona, a boy called Sergio lived with his dog Brown. They were friends since they were born. 
Cardona was a thrilling village out as they liked, it they went for a walk everyday at night.

One day, at night, they went from walk as always, but they returned their house, the dog started to run and Sergio followed Brown. When Brown stopped, Sergio saw a girl on the floor.

The girl was stabbed and they decided to help her and called the police. When the police arrived, they took at girl and Sergio and Brown went home frightened by what had happened.

Six days later, the girl rang at the door Sergio's house. They opened the door and they surprised when they saw a girl. She, in a friendly way asked if she could come in... and Sergio said, of course. She came in the house and she explained all about had happened that night.

Everything had been mistreat of her exhousband that he didn't accept the separation and so he hit her continually and so he exhousband had looked for a refuge so that nobody found him.

At the moment Brown started to feel nervous without stopping moving. Sergio realized and he wanted to search what happened. The dog went out of the house and Sergio and the girl followed them. On arriving in the dark and old yard, Brown stopped in front of a local and he started to bark. Sergio shut up the dog but at the moment went out of the local the exhousband of the girl.

She warned and with panic she called to the police. The mistreated started to run away but Brown could catch him and he grabbed him till the police arrived.

From that moment Brown became the detective dog of the Cardona.

By: Natalia Castro, Adrian Ferrite, Henry Owel, Anibal Bertolé

J&J CRIME (ADRIAN DELCRA, MILAGROS ESCOBOSA I JORDI ALTEMIR)

	THE CRIME J&J

 

My name is Jack and my best friend James and I was detectives for a long time, but a couple of years ago we thought of something we will never forget.

We shared an apartment in New York and worked for a well-known agency called VID. Every Saturday, we went for coffee to Mary Bar. It was calm when suddenly the boss called us. Something strange was going on in the General Bank and he told us to be there as soon as possible. We notified Mary and said there was no problem we left , inviting home.

We had a good time waiting to see who made the robbers. He heard a gunshot and at one point the police surrounded the bank, there were snipers everywhere, roof, doors...

The robbers ran, not realizing they dropped the gun.

It was the perfect test to discover his identity. The cops ran, but they were too far, though not to worry because there was evidence fingerprints. Because of the robbers killed a girl of 23, had been shot in the stomach. They took the girl to the hospital and the gun to the laboratory for investigation.

In the gun identified traces of a mugger, the boy was named Zlatan, a Swedish national, 32 years old and has a history of robberies.

And the other robber not found because there were traces of it.

They went to look for the tracks of trains, Zlatan found and captured.

They questioned him and discovered through questions who the other robber, named Christian, a German national, 31 years for theft and previous history.

They went to Germany, and found in the famous city of Frankfurt, were hidden in a farmhouse.

CONTINUE…

FINDING THE KILLER

Once upon a time there was a man called Mike Hawkins. Mike was a traumatized boy by the death of his mother, which had place on his birth.

When he was a teenager, Mike had a lot of friends, but they weren’t such a good influence. They entered the world of drugs, and invited him to taste them, telling him that they were so relaxing and he could forget all his troubles, being only happy. So, he accepted.

He got addicted, and he started to be a trafficker of all kind of drugs. But after three years of trafficking, police caught him and took him to prison (which was also a reformatory). He had to stay 7 years there.

 Just when he got out, at the age of 25, he received an anonymous call. Somebody told him: “Your father has died”…and hanged up. Furious and depressed, he started to look for the phone numbers of his old friends, neighbors, and everyone who knew his father or even could have met him on his last days of life. But no one trusted him.

Everybody thought that he was mad, and drugs upset his mind. But, just when he thought he couldn’t catch the murderer, his old friend Catherine Harrison called him and said that she could help him.

Catherine was studying to take part on FBI. Mike asked her a lot of things, and finally she said that the body of his father was in his house yet, so he wanted to go. But Catherine told him that she couldn’t go, because she had to solve some things and had to leave him alone. She wished “good luck” for him.

When he was there, Mike looked for proofs that the murderer could have left there. After a few minutes investigating, he found an earring under the sofa. When he watched it carefully, he knew that that earring was exactly as those which he gave to Catherine for her birthday.

A bit worried, he met Catherine at her house, and asked her if she had lost an earring like that one. But she already had those earrings, and showed them to Mike. Without saying anything, Mike could see that pair of earrings was too new for all the time she had worn them.

Thinking again and again, Mike started to look for all the jewelries near Catherine’s house. He visited a few jewelries, but nobody wanted to show the list of their lasts sells if he didn’t have any judicial order.

When he got it, he went again to all the jewelries where he already had been, but no one knew about “Catherine Harrison”.

There was only one more jewelry to ask: the one where he bought the old earrings. When he asked for the lasts boughts of Catherine Harrison, the boss of the jewelry told him that she bought a pair of earrings exactly as the one he had. As soon as that man said that, he knew that his old “friend” Catherine was involved in the dead of his father.

Mike told his discovering to the police, and they took the suspect to the police station. After 3 or 4 hours they arrested Catherine, she told the truth, she was the murderer of Mike’s father.

She hated him, because he swindled her and her family. She said that he stole so much money from Catherine’s family, or their business of steel melting (to make other tools and sell them).

By: Edgar Herrero, Claudia Quiñones & Adrian Ramos

The serial killer

THE SERIAL KILLER

My name is detective Kerry. I live in New York. My job is to solve difficult cases.

I live in a flat near Central Park. I’ve got a little office where I investigate cases.

I returned from my grandma’s house at 2 pm when suddenly my phone rings. I caught the phone. The voice sounded low and quiet. It was from an old man. He asked me to solve a case. I told him I tried it, but I couldn’t guarantee to solve it. The man on the phone was called Agustin and he was a policeman. He sent me the information of the case by fax. In the papers from the fax there was all the information: the place of the crime, the crime weapon, etc…

I went to the place of the crime. The murdered girl was 20 years old. She had been strangled and she had a sign in her stomach. The sign was made with a knife and said: MINE.

I started to investigate the case. Next week, another girl had been found strangled with the same sign in the stomach.

I thought that the murderer must be a serial killer. I was afraid because I didn’t want the murderer to kill another girl next week.

I was almost finding the murderer, but another girl was found dead with the same brands.

I discovered that all the girls were from the same district and were from the same school.

A girl phoned me because she was afraid. She told me she was afraid because all the dead girls were from her class. The three dead girls had been loved by a boy called Bolibus. That boy was obsessed with the girls. He always following them but the girls despised him. That boy loved her too and she was afraid he comes to kill her.

That was good information. I went to the girl’s house to speak about it and protect her.

When I arrived at the girls house, no one opened the door. I pulled the door down and I entered  the house. I listened to someone screaming and I ran to the living room. The girl was hanging but she was still alive. A boy was next to the girl watching the scene. When he saw me, he ran towards me with a knife in his left hand. I shot to his leg and quickly I untied the strength of the girl’s neck. 

I called an ambulance.

Two months later, there was a trial, and the murderer was sentenced to jail.

By: Mar González, Enrique Rodríguez, Víctor Ponga and David Jiménez.